Layouts. I've gone back and tried a different approach to the layout for the film. The first is really basic. It does the job. But I always felt I was being a little lazy with it. The newer version I quite like, and I think it follows the subtext of the film more. The absurdity of the cartoon animals becomes clearer with a slightly more "realistic" approach to the background. It's not a huge change, but I think it's a better option. The final sketch is a very rough version done after a few tweaks suggested by Nick Cross. Just some technical adjustments that should help me avoid a few potential challenges and glitches. It's nice to have the experience of others to draw from.